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Wednesday, September 21, 2016

Banana coloured pith

Here is one of my poems I have made. Try guess what I am writing about. It is called Banana coloured pith.

The textured round consistency sitting there with its butter and pineapple skin staring me in the eye. My tastebuds tingling.
With a sour smell drifting to my nose. The soft squishy rough skin tempting me to eat it. It has a banana coloured pith on the outer a of the blonde flesh. The sweet tangy flavour steals my taste buds. The sweetness bursts at my tongue finally chomp it .….delicious

By Ayah

Monday, September 5, 2016

Theme park builders


This is some writing I think is quite good and is quite persuasive. So here it is. Hope you like it :)


Dear theme park builders,

Surely you would believe that it is disgraceful that you are cutting down trees just for a theme park. Trees help us breathe, animals depend on them and they attract tourists.

Research shows that we need trees because they provide us oxygen. It is certain we need oxygen. Notably in summer they provide us shade. Everybody knows that for some people trees are their shade and they also get their food from the trees.

Of course another reason is New Zealand is known for its greenery. New Zealand has a lot of nature and trees. Furthermore tourists come here to see it. Although tourists pay to see it the money gets used for good things. A sensible idea would be to grow more greenery.

I feel that we shouldn't cut down trees because animals live in the trees and if we cut down the trees we will be destroying their habitat. In addition to that animals also collect food from trees then they won't have any food to eat therefore they will die. An intelligent person like you would know that the food chain will get messed up if they die!!!!!

So please don't cut down the trees for a theme park. The fact is trees provide, shelter, food,tourists,greenery and animals. Overall these are the reasons that I think these plans should not go ahead.

From Ayah M